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Gazing up at the stars wondering where you are
What your doing what your feeling
Lokking up to the ceiling

I wish I was there with you
Somebody with you tonight
To tuck you in and kiss you goodnight

Lying beside you watching you breathing
Wondering what your dreaming
I hope it's e your seeing

If i could slipinto your dreams tonight
I could make everything tight
Defend you from your nightmares's
Because i care

You dont know how much i would give
Just to lie down with you tonight
It would just feel so right
To lie with you tonight

I could walk all over swim any river
Lake or ocean through any coast
How do you like your toast in the morning

It would be so great to wake beside you
No differnt than any other day
Your my last thought at night and i wake up to
The memory of you

I wish I was there with you
Somebody with you tonight
To tuck you in and kiss you goodnight
©2006-2009 ~AStrangerInTheNight
:iconastrangerinthenight:

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wat would ya do if this was you

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:iconhotitallian:
Wow, this is defently a fav. I love it, I've felt just like this. There's a few spelling errors, but other than that this poem is amazing, and i can relate to it. very nice!

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~*~Take a shot not with a gun but with a thought~*~
:iconroo123:
That is really awsome kyle and it really touched my heart.
:iconmazimuz:
Good Poem.

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I could walk all over swim any river - This line doesn't sound right

Lake or ocean through any coast
How do you like your toast in the morning - doesn't really fit well with the rest of the poem
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maybe if you fixed the spelling and Punctuation it would be better. :) great job!

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"Every Second Is Brand New"
:iconjeweljk:
awww thats so sweet. i recognise an Aerosmith line and a Nickelback line in there too :P hehe :hug:

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"All the world's a stage,
And all the men and women merely players." - Shakespeare - "As You Like It"
:iconfallenstar731:
This is so beautiful...wow+fav
:iconastrangerinthenight:
thanx :bow: glad you liked it

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my motto :sprint:
always live you life loud and make it fun as you never know what will happen

R.I.P George Best a footballing god dearly missed by all never will you be forgotten!!
R.I.P Kurt Cobain you will be missed but you will never be fogotten!
:iconastrangerinthenight:
sori bout the spelling errors and thanx :glomp: :bow:

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my motto :sprint:
always live you life loud and make it fun as you never know what will happen

R.I.P George Best a footballing god dearly missed by all never will you be forgotten!!
R.I.P Kurt Cobain you will be missed but you will never be fogotten!
:iconastrangerinthenight:
:) thanx it makes feel all happy to know that

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my motto :sprint:
always live you life loud and make it fun as you never know what will happen

R.I.P George Best a footballing god dearly missed by all never will you be forgotten!!
R.I.P Kurt Cobain you will be missed but you will never be fogotten!
:iconastrangerinthenight:
yea thanx i will cheers

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my motto :sprint:
always live you life loud and make it fun as you never know what will happen

R.I.P George Best a footballing god dearly missed by all never will you be forgotten!!
R.I.P Kurt Cobain you will be missed but you will never be fogotten!
:iconastrangerinthenight:
really where i didnt notice

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my motto :sprint:
always live you life loud and make it fun as you never know what will happen

R.I.P George Best a footballing god dearly missed by all never will you be forgotten!!
R.I.P Kurt Cobain you will be missed but you will never be fogotten!

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